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18．假設(shè)你是李華，你國際學(xué)校的朋友Paul邀請你下個星期天去他們學(xué)校參加文化交流活動并介紹中國傳統(tǒng)繪畫，但是你的爺爺生病住院，不得不謝絕他的邀請．請根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)給Paul用英語寫一封回信．
     要點(diǎn)：
        1．謝絕Paul的邀請；
        2．說明你的理由；
        3．推薦你的同學(xué)Anna參加．
     注意：
       1．詞數(shù)為100左右；
       2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
       3．信的開頭已為你寫好（不計入你所寫詞數(shù)）．
Dear Paul，
Thank you very much for your invitation．
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Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是篇書信，要根據(jù)三點(diǎn)要求來完成，分別是 1．謝絕Paul的邀請；2．說明你的理由；3．推薦你的同學(xué)Anna參加，寫作時要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、寫作內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏；2、要運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z氣，委婉的表示拒絕，注意時態(tài)語態(tài)，避免出現(xiàn)語法和拼寫錯誤；3、適當(dāng)運(yùn)用高級詞匯和句型來為自己的文章增色．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和詞匯為文章增色不少，比如opportunity，introduce to，inform，look after，take my place，has a broad knowledge of等．還運(yùn)用了一些從句使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)合理，如I strongly recommend my friend Anna，who is the most suitable choice，是定語從句，She began to learn painting at an early age and has a broad knowledge of traditional Chinese painting，which，combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English非限制定于從句，也是一句長句等．并注意了委婉語氣的使用I'm sorry to，Sorry again表達(dá)了自己誠懇的抱歉之意．

解答 Dear Paul，
  Thank you very much for your invitation．
  I'd love to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends，but I'm sorry to inform you that I can't．My grandpa is seriously ill in hospital and I have to look after him．As for the introduction speech，I strongly recommend my friend Anna，who is the most suitable choice，to take my place next Sunday．（高分句型1）She began to learn painting at an early age and has a broad knowledge of traditional Chinese painting，which，combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English，will help make your activity a success．（高分句型2）
  Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you．（高分句型3）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 提綱類在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需要積累短語和重要句型．