第五部分:寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié),滿(mǎn)分40分)

第一節(jié):短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1.5分,滿(mǎn)分15分)

此題要求改正所給短文的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷:如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤,在該行右邊橫線(xiàn)上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾(√);如有錯(cuò)誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤),則按下列情況改正:該行多一詞:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉,在該行右邊橫線(xiàn)上寫(xiě)出該詞,并也用斜線(xiàn)劃掉。該行缺一個(gè)詞:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),在該行右邊橫線(xiàn)上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn),在該行右邊橫線(xiàn)上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。注意:原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改。

Dear editor,

In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place.     85.______

Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In      86.______

order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down      87.______

more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was 88.______

almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into   89.______

wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from 90.______

which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should       91.______

realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. 92.______

What’s more, they should take good care of the forests and plant 93.______

trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions.94._____

85.was去掉  86.in去掉  87.house改為houses   88.with改為as 或went改為doing  89.正確  90.struck 改為strike   91.however改為so   92.terribly改為terrible   93.they改為we   94.instead后加of  

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第五部分:寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié),滿(mǎn)分35分)
第一節(jié):短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿(mǎn)分10分)
假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
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刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。
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刪詞:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。
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    刪詞:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

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第五部分:寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié),滿(mǎn)分35分)

第一節(jié):短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題l分,滿(mǎn)分10分)

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    刪詞:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

    修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn),并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

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第一節(jié):短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿(mǎn)分10分)

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增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(^),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn),并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

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