Question

最近，你班就“學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該對老師進(jìn)行民主測評”召開了一次主題班會(huì)。討論情
況如下：

贊成：65%	反對：35%
可以促使老師更加了解自己的優(yōu)劣勢，更友善地對待學(xué)生，提高教學(xué)效率。	學(xué)生評價(jià)不客觀，嚴(yán)格的老師常會(huì)得低分，老師知道后，情緒會(huì)受到影響，從而縱容學(xué)生，不利于學(xué)生的成長。
你的觀點(diǎn)……

要求：根據(jù)表中內(nèi)容，寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文。

Answer 1

One possible version:
Recently a heated discussion about whether the school launch surveys on teachers among students was held in our class, about which there are different opinions.
65% of the students consider it meaningful. They hold the view that teachers will be more responsible afterwards and employ new methods to teach more efficiently. What’s more, teachers will treat students more kindly so that both sides will be in a more harmonious relationship.
However, others don’t think so. They say that some students tend to judge a teacher unfairly who is strict with them. Consequently, how can teachers keep their enthusiasm in their work? It’s likely that they will spoil the students, which may influence their growth in the long run.
Personally, such investigations can only be carried out when the school has done enough to make sure students assess their teachers objectively.

解析試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫作，寫的是一篇以“學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該對老師進(jìn)行民主測評”的主題班會(huì)，分別闡述支持和反對的理由以及作者的想法。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】
文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如about which there are different opinions.這是一個(gè)定語從句（介詞 + which）；teachers will treat students more kindly so that both sides will be in a more harmonious relationship. （so that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）；It’s likely that they will spoil the students, which may influence their growth in the long run，既有固定句型：it islikely that…,又有定語從句。并且主語了句子的銜接如：What’s more，However，Consequently Personally，等。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文寫作。