Question

根據(jù)下列提示，寫(xiě)一篇介紹我國(guó)著名的水稻專(zhuān)家袁隆平的文章。
1．袁隆平, 1937年9月7日出生在重慶的一個(gè)貧困農(nóng)民家庭。
2．1953年畢業(yè)于西南農(nóng)學(xué)院，畢業(yè)后被分配到湘西農(nóng)校任教。
3．1964年開(kāi)始從事水稻研究。1981年榮獲我國(guó)第一個(gè)國(guó)家發(fā)明特等獎(jiǎng)，被國(guó)際上譽(yù)為“雜交水稻之父”。
4．生活簡(jiǎn)樸，不計(jì)名利。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Yuan Longping
Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmer’s family. Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan. He began his research in rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame.

解析試題分析：考查提綱作文：寫(xiě)一篇介紹我國(guó)著名的水稻專(zhuān)家袁隆平的文章。首先要仔細(xì)審題，這篇作文要點(diǎn)很全，要求準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)，注意：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時(shí)態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，這是提綱作文，但是不是完全把要點(diǎn)翻譯出來(lái)，考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒?jí)句式和高級(jí)詞匯，以提高書(shū)面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。也要用一些適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmer’s family. 這句話(huà)是過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)，Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan.這句話(huà)是現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式做狀語(yǔ)， He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. 這句話(huà)用了be honoured as這個(gè)詞組，F(xiàn)amous as he is, he cares little for money and fame. 這句話(huà)是as的倒裝句。
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