Question

“實(shí)行低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)”，“過(guò)低碳生活”，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)成為了人們關(guān)注的熱門話題。最近，你們班的同學(xué)就這個(gè)話題展開(kāi)了熱烈的討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給21st century 寫篇文章，報(bào)道你們班級(jí)的討論情況。

為什么要“實(shí)行低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)”	工廠排放有害物，人類活動(dòng)產(chǎn)生大量二氧化碳，污染嚴(yán)重，環(huán)境惡化。 隨著人口的增長(zhǎng)，自然資源將會(huì)耗盡
如何走“綠色發(fā)展道路”	植樹(shù)造林 回收和利用廢棄物 開(kāi)發(fā)新能源
過(guò)低碳生活如何“從我做起”	（聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，至少列舉兩點(diǎn)）

注意：

對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

字?jǐn)?shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

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Answer 1

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One Possible Version

Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

Through the discussion, we are fully aware of the necessity of carrying out a low carbon economy in our country. Factories have been producing large numbers of harmful chemicals. Meanwhile, human activities also let off carbon gases. As a consequence, all these contribute a lot to serious environmental pollution.What’s worse, with the increase of the population, natural resources will run out.

My calssmates put forward the following suggestions about how to develop in a green way. First, more trees should be planted. Second, it is significant for us to recycle and reuse the waste that people throw away. Third, new energy should be developed and promoted as soon as possible.

We all think it is our duty to live a low carbon life. We are supposed to save every bit of water and electricity. Besides, we should appeal to the people around us to make contributions to creating a green homeland. We are confident that with our combined efforts, our life will make a great difference.

【解析】

試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如. carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic； contribute a lot to； are supposed to還運(yùn)用了主語(yǔ)從句it is significant for us to recycle and reuse the waste that people throw away等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Meanwhile， As a consequence， First, Second, Third, Besides,  等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。