Question

“實(shí)行低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)”，“過(guò)低碳生活”，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)成為了人們關(guān)注的熱門話題。最近，你們班的同學(xué)就這個(gè)話題展開了熱烈的討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給21st century 寫篇文章，報(bào)道你們班級(jí)的討論情況。

為什么要“實(shí)行低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)”	工廠排放有害物，人類活動(dòng)產(chǎn)生大量二氧化碳，污染嚴(yán)重，環(huán)境惡化。 隨著人口的增長(zhǎng)，自然資源將會(huì)耗盡
如何走“綠色發(fā)展道路”	植樹造林 回收和利用廢棄物 開發(fā)新能源
過(guò)低碳生活如何“從我做起”	（聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，至少列舉兩點(diǎn)）

注意：

對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

字?jǐn)?shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One Possible Version

 Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

Through the discussion, we are fully aware of the necessity of carrying out a low carbon economy in our country. Factories have been producing large numbers of harmful chemicals. Meanwhile, human activities also let off carbon gases. As a consequence, all these contribute a lot to serious environmental pollution. What’s worse, with the increase of the population, natural resources will run out.

My calssmates put forward the following suggestions about how to develop in a green way. First, more trees should be planted. Second, it is significant for us to recycle and reuse the waste that people throw away. Third, new energy should be developed and promoted as soon as possible.

We all think it is our duty to live a low carbon life. We are supposed to save every bit of water and electricity. Besides, we should appeal to the people around us to make contributions to creating a green homeland. We are confident that with our combined efforts, our life will make a great difference.

【解析】

試題分析：

英語(yǔ)寫作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程。啟動(dòng)知識(shí)信息儲(chǔ)存，構(gòu)思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對(duì)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語(yǔ)要求更高。先審題，弄清寫作要求，審題是寫好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。提醒考生注意時(shí)態(tài)及語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用。寫作時(shí)要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語(yǔ)言環(huán)境。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如had a heated discussion about, are fully aware of the necessity of, as soon as possible, make contributions to，還運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Through the discussion；As a consequence, What’s worse，F(xiàn)irst, Second, Third,等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。