Question

書面表達(dá) （共1題，滿分25分）
為了慶祝我校建校90周年，你所在的班級(jí)將要舉辦一次主題為 “What Can We Do For Our School?” 的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，要求從以下幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行闡述，可適當(dāng)舉例說(shuō)明。
1、時(shí)刻要舉止行為得體，尊敬老師，關(guān)心幫助同學(xué)；
2、關(guān)心熱愛班集體，保持校園環(huán)境清潔優(yōu)美；
3、養(yǎng)成良好學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)文化知識(shí);
4、鍛煉身體，將來(lái)為社會(huì)做貢獻(xiàn)，為母校爭(zhēng)光。
注意：詞數(shù)：100—120詞；開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞匯。
參考詞匯： 校園----campus    
What Can We Do For Our School?
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.
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Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something. The first thing we can do is to behave ourselves well and be polite all the time. We should respect the teachers and help our classmates. Then we should try our best to make our campus clean and beautiful. Every one of us may take care of the trees and grass in the campus, and we can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the dustbin. If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will make our school a better place to study and live in.
As a student, the most important is to study hard，have a good knowledge of every subject and improve ourselves in every aspect. What’s more, we can take exercise and build up our strength in order to make great contributions to our country in the future. Our school will be proud of us.

解析這篇文章主要是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)翻譯，但是不能逐字逐句翻譯，文章里用了些高級(jí)的詞匯、短語(yǔ)，如：behave ourselves，make our campus clean，form a good habit of ，have a good knowledge of，in every aspect. build up our strength ，make great contributions to ，be proud of，這些都是平常學(xué)的，但是學(xué)生用的時(shí)候就想不起來(lái)。在句型翻譯中，范文給了很好的例子：we will make our school a better place to study and live in. the most important is to study hard，對(duì)不定式的熟練使用恰到好處。另外值得一提的是，在文章銜接連貫時(shí)我們也要注意，像這篇文章，用的是What’s more,讀起來(lái)很自然。