閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
If you like to break things when you are unhappy, the Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School is the school for you. This term, Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School will build a "stress wall" to help students who feel unhappy because of schoolwork or for other reasons.
Tao Dehua, a leader at the school said the idea of a stress wall started when footprints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken.
"These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they don't get along well with other students. When under stress, the body get ready to either run or fight and becomes very nervous. Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress," Tao said.
"Tests and homework make me Sad," said Lu Yan, a junior girl. “I can't wait to hit the wall. It will help me a lot with my problems." 
Another girl student who wouldn't give her name said that the wall won't help. “Mainly because it can't talk," she said. "I need to talk to someone when I'm sad."
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1、以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文內(nèi)容;
2、然后以約120個(gè)詞就“Should the stress wall be built"這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法,并包括以下要點(diǎn):
(1) 學(xué)生的壓力來源;
(2) 是否該建此墻;
(3) 提供一些其他有效的減壓方法。
【寫作要求】
l、可以參照閱讀材料但不得直接引用原文的句子;
2、作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 

1、The passage conveys to us that in order to help students with stress, the Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School built a “stress wall” for students to relax, towards which students have different opinions.
2、One possible version:
Nowadays, students are under great pressure, which mainly comes from their peers, parents as well as school work. There is no doubt that as the competing for better academic work and future is getting fiercer and fiercer, students feel more and more pressure.
As far as I am concerned, building a stress wall, which the students can hit, is not appropriate. For one thing, as the saying goes, violence is not the solution to problems, which means that even if students punch the wall heavily, the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out. For another, this may lead students to solve a problem with violence, causing more trouble.           
People have different ways of relieving stress in order to live happy and healthy lives. Some people prefer to engage in physical exercise by taking part in outdoor activities or playing sports, while some feel more relaxed listening to music or even after a good sleep. As for me, I find that the best way to reduce stress is to spend time with my family or friends. In addiction, some interest clubs such as music, dance, are also good places that offer comfort to students.
本文是篇論說文,框架提示較詳細(xì),學(xué)生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題,根據(jù)提示寫作分為三部分內(nèi)容,第一段陳述學(xué)生壓力的來源;第二段發(fā)表自己的看法,是否該建此“壓力墻”,要有自己肯定的主意,不能模棱兩可;第三段提供其他減壓方法,附帶敘述其用處。另外,要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài),要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。用第一人稱和第三人稱有單數(shù)也要用復(fù)數(shù)。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接,以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全,表達(dá)思路明確,每一段的段首句使用準(zhǔn)確到位,將三段內(nèi)容一目了然呈現(xiàn)出來。文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿,比如under great pressure,as well as,let out,the best way to,such as等, 還運(yùn)用了定語從句which mainly comes from their peers, parents as well as school work;which the students can hit, is not appropriate;which means that even if students punch the wall heavily等及句型There is no doubt that as the competing for better academic work非謂語動(dòng)詞causing more trouble等。并注意了句子的銜接如:nowadays,as far as I am concerned,F(xiàn)or one thing……For another,In addiction等。
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