Question

Tom 和 Peter 是鄰居，又是好朋友。他們有很多共同之處，又有不同點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)閱讀下面表格并寫一篇短文。

	Tom	Peter
相同點(diǎn)	1. 都在離家很遠(yuǎn)的同一間學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)；2．都很努力學(xué)習(xí)，互相幫助；3. 都擅長(zhǎng)數(shù)學(xué)和英語(yǔ)；4. 他們都相信只有努力學(xué)習(xí)和積極鍛煉身體相結(jié)合才能取得更大進(jìn)步。
不同點(diǎn)	1. 喜歡流行歌曲； 2. 喜歡參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，尤其是籃球	1. 偏愛(ài)古典音樂(lè)； 2. 喜歡去圖書(shū)館看書(shū)

參考詞匯： classical music古典音樂(lè)
popular songs 流行歌曲
take exercise 鍛煉
【寫作要求】
1. 詞數(shù)約100；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

Tom and Peter are not only neighbours but also good friends. They have much in common. For example, they study in the same school, which is far away from their homes. Both of them work very hard and help each other, and they are both good at maths and English. They both believe only by working hard and taking more exercise can they make greater progress.
However, they are also different from each other in many ways. Tom likes listening to popular songs while Peter prefers classical music. In their spare time, Tom often takes part in all kinds of sports, especially playing basketball, but Peter always enjoys reading in the school library.

試題分析：考查提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整：Tom and Peter are not only…but also …不但…而且…，have much in common有很多相同之處，be good at擅長(zhǎng)，be different from.和…不同， In their spare time,在他們空閑時(shí)間，they study in the same school, which is far away from their homes. 這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， They both believe only by working hard and taking more exercise can they make greater progress. 這句話用了倒裝句， Tom likes listening to popular songs while Peter prefers classical music.這句話用while表示對(duì)比。