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2．上星期，你們班召開了以"My Chinese Dream"為主題的班會活動，每位同學(xué)都談了他們自己對中國夢的理解．請寫一篇日記，敘述班會情況及自己的感受．
內(nèi)容要點如下：1．同學(xué)們談到中國夢紛紛表示大受鼓舞；2．你談到了自己的夢想；=3．如何實現(xiàn)自己的夢想．
要求：詞數(shù)100字左右；
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Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
Inspired by President Xi's Chinese Dream，everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream．
被席總統(tǒng)的中國夢所鼓舞，每個人都在談?wù)撍�所理解的中國夢�?br />高分句型二：
I want to be a doctor when I grow up because doctors not only can save people's lives but also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge．
我想成為一名醫(yī)生，當(dāng)我長大了，因為醫(yī)生不僅可以挽救人們的生命，也用他們的專業(yè)知識幫助人們過上更好的生活．

解答 Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream．Inspired by President Xi's Chinese Dream，everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream（高分句型一）．
As middle school students，we should have a Chinese Dream．Our country is becoming stronger and stronger，we are all proud of it．And we all believe this dream will come true in the future．I want to be a doctor when I grow up because doctors not only can save people's lives but also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge（高分句型二）．
To realize my dream，I must try to study/work hard from now on．I should often do sports to keep healthy．I should obey the school rules and take part in all kinds of meaningful activities．I hope my dream will come true，too．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．