分析 這是一篇開放式作文,寫作時(shí)不僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實(shí),要組成一篇通順連貫的短文.需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括,缺一不可.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,一定要契合給出的開頭,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.
亮點(diǎn)句型一:Though I have developed a habit of playing the piano for one hour every day,my parents just require me to pay more attention to English study.雖然我養(yǎng)成了每天彈一小時(shí)鋼琴的習(xí)慣,但我的父母只要求我多注意英語學(xué)習(xí).本句是一個(gè)由though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句.
亮點(diǎn)句型二:I pay attention to my diet as well,but I am still putting on weight.我也注意我的飲食,但我仍在長(zhǎng)胖.本句是一個(gè)由but引導(dǎo)的轉(zhuǎn)折句.
解答 Dear Mr.Advice:
I am quite upset by two problems and don't know how to deal with them.
My parents are hard on me and always want me to achieve high grades at school.Though I have developed a habit of playing the piano for one hour every day,my parents just require me to pay more attention to English study.(亮點(diǎn)句型一)They even want to punish me if I don't drop it.
I am quite ashamed of my weight.I follow doctors'advice and insist on working out every day.I pay attention to my diet as well,but I am still putting on weight!(亮點(diǎn)句型二)My weight just makes me feel embarrassed all the time.Do I really have to risk my health for a slim figure and take some weight-loss pills?They have side effects on our health!
Please give me some suggestions on how to get out of the terrible situation.
Sincerely yours,
Worried Angel
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