Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞筆友Mike發(fā)來電子郵件，詢問最近你市舉辦的“最美家鄉(xiāng)”英語演講比賽活動的情況。請給他回一封電子郵件，介紹以下該活動。要點如下：

1. 來自全市15所36名學(xué)生參加了此次英語演講比賽；

2. 比賽分為三個環(huán)節(jié)：英語演講、回答評委提出的問題和才藝表演；

3. 活動的意義。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Dear Mike,

On December 9, an English speech contest was held in our city. _______________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

On December 9, an English speech contest was held in out city. 36 students from 15 schools took part. The contest consisted of three rounds; an English speech, answering the questions raised by the judges and a talent show. Every student made an excellent speech in English, whose theme is about “the Beauty of Our City”. When they answered the questions, they felt confident. In the talent show, colorful performances given by them were more than attractive. Undoubtedly, this contest is a big success.

Through the activity, the students have learnt a lot. Not only have they improved their spoken English, but they also enjoy the process of the contest and a sense of achievement. The students from different schools appreciate each other and develop solid friendship.

Best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點已給出，成文時要注意：1.時態(tài)：靈活變換；2.文章的內(nèi)容要點要齊全：（1）來自全市15所36名學(xué)生參加了此次英語演講比賽；（2）比賽分為三個環(huán)節(jié)：英語演講、回答評委提出的問題和才藝表演；（3）活動的意義。3.注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次；4.注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。5.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制，100單詞左右。

亮點說明：本文是一篇電子郵件，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語句精練，運用高級句子。answering the questions raised by the judges a過去分詞作后置定語；Every student made an excellent speech in English, whose theme is about “the Beauty of Our City” . whose引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；When they answered the questions, they felt confident. In the talent show, colorful performances given by them were more than attractive. When引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句；this contest is a big success. a big success的運用巧妙至極；Not only have they improved their spoken English, but they also enjoy the process of the contest and a sense of achievement.倒裝句使用經(jīng)典。