Question

【題目】假如你是一名大學生，名叫李華。你所在的班級最近就“大學生是否應經(jīng)濟獨立”的話題展開討論，同學們發(fā)表了不同的看法。請你根據(jù)以下所給內(nèi)容，寫一封信給某英語報社，反映討論情況。

60%的同學的看法	1.靠自己打工來支付學費會影響學業(yè)； 2.現(xiàn)在把精力都用在學習上，將來報答父母的養(yǎng)育之恩；
25%的同學的看法	1.通過打工可以獲得工作經(jīng)驗，了解社會； 2.體會父母掙錢不易，從而戒掉亂花錢的壞習慣；
15%的同學的看法 （包括你在內(nèi)）	覺得雙方的觀點都有一定的道理，但又不完全贊同； 我個人的看法是……

注意：1．文章的起始句已經(jīng)給出；

2．詞數(shù)100左右（不包括起始句）；

參考詞匯： 報答: repay 學費: tuition 經(jīng)濟獨立: financially independent

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have had on whether or not university students should be financially independent.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have had on whether or not university students should be financially independent.

60% of the students think that university students don’t have to be financially independent, because trying to make money will affect their studies. They also think that they can repay their parents in the future.

25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of society. Besides, when students find it hard to make money, they won’t waste their money any longer.

15% of the students, including myself, partly agree with the opinions above. Personally I think that as grownups, we should not depend on our parents any more. However, if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us, we should put our studies in the first place.

Thank you for reading my letter

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇給英語報社的書信，反映就“大學生是否應經(jīng)濟獨立”的話題所展開的討論情況。根據(jù)所給提綱，充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當，語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇書信，格式正確，要點齊全，語句精煉，布局合理，文中使用高級句子。on whether or not university students should be financially independent.句中運用介詞的賓語從句；60% of the students think that university students don’t have to be financially independent, because trying to make money will affect their studies.賓語從句和原因狀語從句完美結(jié)合；25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of society.同位語從句和動名詞短語做主語同句出現(xiàn)；if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us, we should put our studies in the first place.if條件句恰到好處；另外，Besides, Personally，However,的運用為文章增色添彩。