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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：把缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last year, during the summer holiday, I found part-time job, worked in a toothbrush factory at night. Not until I experienced it did I realized that it was no easy job.I went to work when my parents were going to bed. On the morning, when my parents were going to work, I came to home to sleep. This backward schedule was very tough for me that I often felt tiring. But I am glad that I had this unforgettable experience. Not only is it fun to “rise and shine” along with the moon or stars, but also I had learned to appreciate the hard work of those which are working while the rest of us are sleeping.

Answer 1

【答案】1. found后加a

2. worked改成working

3. realized改成 realize

4. On改成In

5. 把came to home中的to去掉

6. very改成so

7. tiring改成tired

8. or改成and

9. had改成have

10. which改成who

【解析】1.句意：我找到了一份兼職工作。根據(jù)句意可知在found后加a。

2.此處是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)，表主動關系，故把worked改成working。

3. Not until I experienced it did I realized that it was no easy job此句是部分倒裝，故把realized改成 realize 。

4.固定搭配：in the morning在上午，故把On改成In 。注意大寫開頭。

5. home在這里是副詞，故把came to home中的to去掉。

6.此處是so---that---引導的結果狀語從句，故把very改成so。

7.句意：我感到累。根據(jù)句意可知把 tiring改成tired 。

8.句意：月亮和星星。根據(jù)句意可知此處是并列的遞進關系，故把 or改成and。

9.根據(jù)句意可知此處應該用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，故把had改成have。

10.本句中those是先行詞，指人，在后面的定語從句中做主語，故把which改成who。