【題目】某英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在就中學(xué)生可不可以帶手機(jī)上學(xué)這一話題開(kāi)展討論。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,向該報(bào)編輯寫(xiě)一封英文信,發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)。

手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)

1.便于與父母和朋友聯(lián)系; 2.能增加樂(lè)趣。

帶手機(jī)上學(xué) 存在的問(wèn)題

1.上課時(shí)使用手機(jī)干擾教學(xué);2.用手機(jī)聊天、上網(wǎng)時(shí)費(fèi)錢。

建議

1.上課時(shí)不許使用手機(jī); 2.貴重物品,個(gè)人宜妥善保管。

注意:1.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2.詞數(shù):不少于100字。

Dear Editor :

I’m a senior three student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion

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【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m a senior two student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. I think they can do that. Because students can stay in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.

However, there are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.

In conclusion,I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive,the owner should take good care of it.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析:本文是一篇提綱類作文,是一篇正反觀點(diǎn)類文章。我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前,一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn),理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累,寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外,還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)stay in touch with與。。保持聯(lián)系;have fun娛樂(lè);spend too much time and money on花費(fèi)時(shí)間和錢在。。上;In conclusion總而言之;I’m writing to tell you my opinion whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones.這個(gè)句子whether引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句;In conclusion, I suggest that students should not use phones in the classroom這個(gè)句子suggest 建議,賓語(yǔ)從句用(should) do 。

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