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11．假如你是李津，你在報(bào)上看到天津電視臺(tái)今年將舉辦"外國人學(xué)中文"才藝大賽．你的美國朋友Peter正在天津大學(xué)學(xué)中文，你覺得他應(yīng)去試一試．請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)給他寫信告知此事，并表示可以提供幫助．
比賽時(shí)間：7月18日
報(bào)名時(shí)間：截止到6月30日
報(bào)名地點(diǎn)：天津電視臺(tái)
參賽內(nèi)容：中文形式的各種表演，比如唱中文歌，…
獲獎(jiǎng)辦法：獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)邔⒈皇谟瑾?jiǎng)?wù)�，并有機(jī)會(huì)到北京參觀旅游
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3．參考詞匯：才藝大賽 talent show
Dear Peter，
How's everything going？
                                                                   
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給美國朋友Peter寫一封信．告知他天津電視臺(tái)今年將舉辦"外國人學(xué)中文"才藝大賽，他應(yīng)去試一試．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．開頭-問候； 2．告知比賽相關(guān)事宜：比賽時(shí)間；報(bào)名時(shí)間；報(bào)名地點(diǎn)；參賽內(nèi)容；獲獎(jiǎng)辦法；3．結(jié)尾．
重要短語：be talent in sth （意味著某事），a new chapter to us （對(duì)…某人來說是新的篇章），either…or…（慶祝某事），perform a play（表演一個(gè)戲�。�，award a medal（獲獎(jiǎng)），have the opportunity to do（有做某事的機(jī)會(huì)），would like to do（想要做某事），sign up（報(bào)名），be more than glad（非常高興）．
【高分句型一】
1．I have read in a newspaper that a"Learn Chinese"Foreigners'Talent Show will be held in Tianjin Television Station on July 18．
此處是由連詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
2．①I think②it is a good chance for you to show your talent，and how well you've learned Chinese．
①此處是由省略了連詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．
  ②此處是主語從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+名詞短語+for sb+to do sth"．
【高分句型三】
3．If you would like to try，you'll have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June．
  此處是由連詞"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句為"you'll have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June"．

解答 Dear Peter，
How's everything going？I have read in a newspaper that a"Learn Chinese"Foreigners'Talent Show will be held in Tianjin Television Station on July 18．【高分句型一】（比賽時(shí)間）I know you are talent in performing，and you are studying Chinese in Tianjin University．I think it is a good chance for you to show your talent，and how well you've learned Chinese．【高分句型二】You can either sing Chinese Songs or perform a short play．（參賽內(nèi)容）The winners will be awarded a medal，and have the opportunity to visit Beijing．（獲獎(jiǎng)辦法）
If you would like to try，you'll have to go to the TV station（報(bào)名地點(diǎn)） to sign up before the end of June．【高分句型三】（報(bào)名時(shí)間）
If there is anything I can do for you，I would be more than glad to help．（結(jié)尾）
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．