Question

9．假如你叫李華，是一名高中生．最近，某國(guó)際友好學(xué)校的學(xué)生將來(lái)你校參觀．學(xué)校將選拔20名形象大使參與接待工作．你希望成為一名形象大使，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的寫作提綱寫一封自薦信．
1．寫信的目的；
2．陳述你的優(yōu)勢(shì)；
3．你對(duì)這次交流活動(dòng)的看法（增進(jìn)友誼，加深文化了解）
4．希望獲得批準(zhǔn)．
注意：1．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
  2．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：形象大使image ambassador
Dear Sir/Madam，
          ．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封自薦信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述．內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信的目的；2．陳述優(yōu)勢(shì)；3．對(duì)這次交流活動(dòng)的看法；4．希望獲得批準(zhǔn)．
高分句型：
1．As a member of the English club in my city，I have a lot of chances to speak English with native speakers，so I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners in English．
句子里have a lot of chances to 表示"有機(jī)會(huì)做某事"； have no difficulty doing sth表示"做某事沒(méi)有困難"．
作為我們城市的英文俱樂(lè)部的成員，我有很多機(jī)會(huì)和當(dāng)?shù)厝苏f(shuō)英語(yǔ)，所以我和外國(guó)人用英文交流沒(méi)有問(wèn)題．
2．By accompanying visiting students from foreign countries，I can exchange ideas with them and spread Chinese culture．
句子里 accompany是動(dòng)詞，表示"陪伴"；exchange sth with sb表示"和某人交流某事"．
通過(guò)陪同外國(guó)學(xué)生參觀，我能和他們交流思想，傳播中國(guó)文化．

解答 Dear sir or Madam，
    My name is Li Hua．I'm writing to recommend myself as one of the image ambassadors．（寫信的目的）
    I come from Class 3 Senior 2．I do well in my lessons，especially good at spoken English．I got the first pace in the English speech contest in our city last year．As a member of the English club in my city，I have a lot of chances to speak English with native speakers，so I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners in English．【高分句型一】Besides，I'm interested in Western culture，so I love reading English novels in my spare time．（陳述優(yōu)勢(shì)）
    I would like to learn more about Western countries and have a better understanding of foreign culture．I think this is a good chance for me to put my talent to good use．By accompanying visiting students from foreign countries，I can exchange ideas with them and spread Chinese culture．【高分句型二】I hope to be an image ambassador of our school．（對(duì)這次交流活動(dòng)的看法）
    Looking forward to your reply．（希望獲得批準(zhǔn)）
                                                             Yours，
                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給出的要點(diǎn)比較多，所以在寫作時(shí)注意不要漏掉任何一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，無(wú)論是漢語(yǔ)還是英文，因?yàn)檫@些是閱卷老師的重點(diǎn)；同時(shí)，加一些連詞使這些要點(diǎn)條理清楚的表達(dá)出來(lái)．