【題目】書面表達

假設你是新華中學的學生李華,你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件,詢問你暑假里的打算,但你因準備期末考試未能及時回復。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回封郵件:

1.未及時回信的原因;

2.你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)。

注意:

1.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;

2.詞數(shù):120左右。

Dear Tom,

_________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Tom,

How is everything going on with you? I’m writing this letter to express my apology to you for not writing you back in time. In the first place, I’d be happy if you could accept my apology. It’s of great importance for me to make full preparations for the final exam last week, you know.

I have a busy schedule for the coming summer vocation. I’ve decided to find a part-time job so as to gain some social experience. I will also go to Shanghai to take a summer course. Besides, I’m going to work as a volunteer for an organization that helps poor children in the countryside.

I am looking forward to hearing from you. And I’d appreciate it very much if you would give me an early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:本文是篇郵件應用文,內(nèi)容提示較簡潔,只是框架,但學生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的?忌趯懽髦氨匦拚J真審題,首先要注意文章的時態(tài),用一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時。人稱用第一和第二人稱。根據(jù)寫作要求文章分三段來寫。第一段首先對不能及時回復郵件表示歉意并表明原因,之后提出自己的打算。第二段重點描述自己的具體計劃和想法。第三段總結全文。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應該注意句子的銜接,以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文章要點齊全,表達思路明確,知識點運用恰當?shù)轿,文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,比如in time, look forward to; It’s of great importance for me to make full preparations for the final exam last week, you know.;定語從句that helps poor children in the countryside. 修飾an organization; I’d appreciate it very much if…;等等。并注意了句子的銜接如:besides,and等。

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