【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.

【答案】

【1】the –a

【2】think –thought

【3】or—and

【4】on—with

【5】seriously---serious

【6】airs---air

【7】much---many

【8】found---find

【9】your---our

【10】it去掉。

【解析】

試題分析： 通過本文的閱讀和改錯(cuò)，考查學(xué)生的固定搭配和時(shí)態(tài)和非謂語動(dòng)詞的用法、連詞、冠詞的區(qū)別等。

【1】the –a 冠詞用法錯(cuò)誤。首次出現(xiàn)的名詞，用不定冠詞a。

【2】think –thought 時(shí)態(tài)用法錯(cuò)誤。這里用一般過去時(shí)，表示“過去認(rèn)為”。

【3】or—and 連詞用法錯(cuò)誤。前后句為并列關(guān)系，故用連詞and。

【4】on—with 短語搭配錯(cuò)誤。短語with the development of隨著……的發(fā)展。

【5】seriously---serious 詞性用法錯(cuò)誤。修飾名詞，前面用形容詞。

【6】airs---air 名詞用法錯(cuò)誤。名詞air為不可數(shù)名詞

【7】much---many 名詞animal為可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)，故用many修飾。

【8】found---find 動(dòng)詞用法錯(cuò)誤。情態(tài)動(dòng)詞must后接動(dòng)詞原形。

【9】your---our 代詞用法錯(cuò)誤。這里應(yīng)當(dāng)是保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境。人稱應(yīng)該保持一致。

【10】it去掉。代詞用法錯(cuò)誤。我們將生活在遺憾中。regret是不及物動(dòng)詞，后面不用接賓語。

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