Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。
There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. As they say, “As you sow, so shall you reap（收獲）.”
注意：1. 無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示；
2. 除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
3 .文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
4. 詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”
I failed in the last exam. So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything. I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. Later on, I found things got even worse. Meanwhile, a great many students made every effort to study. Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. So I made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates. Now I’m progressing in my studies. I feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually.
My story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for the lazy. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.

解析試題分析：考查開放性作文。開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文用了一些常見短語(yǔ)： have a desire for 渴望，belong to屬于，make every effort to do努力做…，make the best of 充分利用，catch up with趕上， pay off成功，有回報(bào)，還有范文中的句式也很出彩：As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything.這句話用了倒裝句，I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. 這句話也用了倒裝句，. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。
考點(diǎn)：考查開放式書面表達(dá)