Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩赴，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin．Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music"．After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store． There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed．He became my the first guitar teacher．It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】learn→learning

【2】Therefore→However

【3】at→from

【4】started→start

【5】all→both

【6】that→which

【7】去掉the或my

【8】加to

【9】model→models

【10】importantly →important

【解析】

試題分析：當我小的時候，我花了十年的時間練習小提琴。但是我不能理解“真正的音樂”。在我高中畢業(yè)后， 我的一個朋友建議我們開始學習吉他。并且我們也找到了一個吉他老師，現(xiàn)在吉他成了我生活中重要的一部分，我對音樂也有了更深的理解。

【1】learn→learning 考查非謂語動詞。I spent more than ten years learn the violin 固定短語：spend time/ money doing sth “花錢或時間做某事”，所以用learning。

【2】Therefore→However 考查連詞。Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music"．根據(jù)上下文內(nèi)容可知此處前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關系，所以用However。

【3】at→from 考查介詞。After I graduated at high school, 固定短語：graduate from “從……畢業(yè)”，故用from。

【4】started→start 考查時態(tài)。a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar。suggest 當“建議”講時，后面賓語從句的謂語動詞應該用“should +v原形”，故用start。

【5】all→both 考查代詞。a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．根據(jù)前面主句可知此處指朋友和作者兩個人，用both。

【6】that→which 考查關系詞。l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars。從結構可知the day后是介詞+which/whom引導的定語從句，此處指代day所以用which，故用which。

【7】去掉the或my 考查代詞。He became my the first guitar teacher．物主代詞和定冠詞均屬于前位限定詞，不能同時出現(xiàn)，去掉the或my。

【8】加to 考查介詞。It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．固定句型：it takes sb some time to do sth“做某事花費某人多長時間”，所以加to 。

【9】model→models 考查單復數(shù)。It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model。several 修飾復數(shù)名詞，用models 。

【10】importantly →important考查形容詞。Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day. 修飾名詞part應該用形容詞，用important