Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的朋友 Peter上次來訪后驚嘆你們家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化，回去后寫信詢問你們是如何在實(shí)踐中將“綠水青山就是金山銀山”化為生動的現(xiàn)實(shí)的。

要點(diǎn)：1.簡要介紹之前存在的問題；2.具體整改措施及帶來的好處。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am glad to have received your letter asking about how we put “Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets” into practice. Here is something about it.

Several years ago, a couple of economic zones were built to attract investors aiming at developing the economy. Unfortunately, all the efforts were in vain due to the poor natural environment. Only then did the government realize the importance of green hills and clear waters. Therefore, concrete measures were taken to beautify the environment such as preventing pollution, planting trees and so on, which contributed to a brand-new natural environment with birds singing in the forest and fish swimming in clear water. Owing to the inviting environment, more and more people came to visit and invest, which in turn led to a boom of our economy.

Looking forward to seeing you again in my hometown. I am sure you will like it better.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給Peter回信介紹如何在實(shí)踐中將“綠水青山就是金山銀山”化為生動的現(xiàn)實(shí)的。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu): 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

簡要介紹之前存在的問題。

具體整改措施及帶來的好處。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)

be glad to；a couple of；be supposed to do；aim at；looking forward to

第三步: 連詞成句

I am glad to have received your letter asking about how we put “Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets” into practice. Here is something about it.

Several years ago, a couple of economic zones were built to attract investors aiming at developing the economy.

Only then did the government realize the importance of green hills and clear waters.

Owing to the inviting environment, more and more people came to visit and invest, which in turn led to a boom of our economy.

Looking forward to seeing you again in my hometown. I am sure you will like it better.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤色修改