Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他暑假將來北京參加“外國人唱中國歌大賽”，希望你為他推薦一首中文歌曲。請給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.推薦曲目；

2.推薦理由；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

How is it going? I'm so glad to hear you will come to Beijing and participate in the Chinese Singing Competition for Foreigners this summer vacation. For the song to choose, I highly recommend Moli Hua, Jasmine Flower, which is representative of Chinese-folk music.

My recommendation is based on the following reasons. First of all, it enjoys wide popularity, so there's no doubt it will attract the audience's attention once you start to sing. Moreover, this song has beautiful melody and simple lyrics, which are relatively easy for you to learn in a short time. At the same time, the soothing tunes will make your learning process pleasant and comfortable. I bet you are bound to stand out among all the competitors.

I sincerely hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish you a wonderful performance. When you come to Beijing, remember to let me know, since I'd like to be there to cheer for you.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。文章要求寫一封電子郵件，就你的英國朋友Jim暑假來北京參加“中國歌曲演唱大賽”的參賽歌曲給出建議。內(nèi)容包括推薦的曲目、推薦該曲目的原因以及對他比賽成功的祝愿。

分析題目可知，文章要求寫一封建議郵件，內(nèi)容包括推薦的曲目以及為什么要推薦這首歌，這是一般事實，因此全文可使用一般現(xiàn)在時。本篇文章的要求較為簡單明確，因此可發(fā)揮的空間較多，但關(guān)于推薦理由要詳細(xì)描述。

文章可采用三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段介紹了作者寫郵件的目的，即歡迎朋友到北京來參加比賽，并推薦朋友在比賽中唱茉莉花。第二段為郵件的正文部分，詳細(xì)介紹了推薦唱茉莉花的原因，其中包括這首歌傳唱度非常高；歌曲的旋律和歌詞非常優(yōu)美；曲調(diào)非常舒緩學(xué)習(xí)起來非常的享受。第三段則表示了作者對朋友參加比賽的美好祝愿。