Question

假如你是新華中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華，你校校報(bào)最近為高三學(xué)生創(chuàng)立了名為 “Sharing” 的專欄(column)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇文章對(duì)其進(jìn)行介紹，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：
開(kāi)設(shè)目的：緩解壓力，確保健康
專欄內(nèi)容：高三學(xué)生的問(wèn)題、困擾及焦慮；有針對(duì)性的指導(dǎo)及建議
專欄優(yōu)勢(shì)：專業(yè)的心理指導(dǎo)
你的感想
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Our school has set up a column called Sharing for Senior 3 students. _________________
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Answer 1

Our school has recently set up a column called Sharing for Senior 3 students. The column, aimed at relieving pressure and ensuring the health of us students, mainly deals with our worries in life and the challenges we meet in the course of study. It has a unique advantage that we can seek from experts in psychology some professional advice on our respective problems. 
In my opinion, our school attaches great importance to our study and our mental health as well. Starting this column provides us with a platform on which to communicate with others and pour out our feelings. On the other hand, we can turn to it for help when at a loss what to do. Under the expert guidance of the column, I believe, we can achieve our goals with more confidence and keep a good state of mind at the same time.

試題分析：：考查提綱式作文：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】The column, aimed at relieving pressure and ensuring the health of us students, mainly deals with our worries in life and the challenges we meet in the course of study. 這句話用了過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)，It has a unique advantage that we can seek from experts in psychology some professional advice on our respective problems. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， In my opinion, our school attaches great importance to our study and our mental health as well. 這句話里面用了attaches great importance to這個(gè)詞組， Starting this column provides us with a platform on which to communicate with others and pour out our feelings. 這句話用了動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)從句， we can turn to it for help when at a loss what to do. 這句話用了不定式，還有范文還使用了 On the other hand,怎樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。