Question

請根據(jù)下面提供的內(nèi)容寫一篇人物簡介。
李娜，1982年2月26日出生，中國著名女子網(wǎng)球運動員。湖北武漢人。李娜從小就受父親影響，對運動表現(xiàn)出濃烈興趣，6歲開始學(xué)網(wǎng)球。 2002年：離開網(wǎng)球場，到大學(xué)讀書;兩年后重返球場；在包括她丈夫在內(nèi)的幾位著名教練的指導(dǎo)下，進步神速；2011年：法國公開賽女子單打冠軍。第一位獲得大滿貫賽事單打冠軍的亞洲網(wǎng)球選手。2013年，李娜成為《時代》雜志4月29日出版的封面人物，并入選該年度全球百大最有影響力人物名單。 世界排名躍居前三。
參考詞匯：  1. 法國公開賽:French Open   2. 女子單打冠軍：women’s singles title
3. 大滿貫：Grand Slam
注意：  1.詞數(shù)100左右；  2.標(biāo)題已給出。
Li Na – A shining tennis star
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Answer 1

Li Na，a famous tennis player, was born in Wuhan Hubei Province ,on Feb.26,1982.Now she has moved up to third in the world.
Thanks to the influence of his father, Li Na expressed a keen interest in sports from her childhood. She began to practice tennis at the age of six .In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university, but two years later she returned. With the help of some famous trainers, including her husband, she has been making fantastic progress. As a result, she won the 2011 French Open women’s singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles. In 2013, she even became a cover character in the Times magazine which came out on April29 and was honored as one of the 100th most powerful character in the world.
Such is Li Na, a brilliant tennis player, who we Chinese are proud of.

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