Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們班慶祝王老師即將退休的活動的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】 Last Monday I was walking on the campus when I heard two students saying that Mrs. Wang, who had been teaching us English for two years, would retire the next month.

I returned to the classroom and shared the news with my classmates. To express our thanks to Mrs. Wang for his patient teaching, we agreed on a celebration after a heated discussion.

After school we began to make preparations. I went to the flower shop to buy a bunch of flowers, representing our love and respect for our dear teacher. One of my classmates made a PPT, which included some photos recording the touching moments we spent together.

On Tuesday morning, when Mrs. Wang came into the classroom, all of us stood up and I presented the flowers to her, with the background showing “Thank you Mrs. Wang! May you be happy every day.” With tears in her eyes, Mrs. Wang was greatly moved by what we did! She said her feelings were beyond words.

But for this experience, I would have never realized the importance of cherishing every moment in our daily life.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫作文。要求根據(jù)圖畫提示，寫一篇周記，記述你們班慶祝王老師即將退休的活動的全過程。

圖表作文的關鍵是仔細審圖，明確每幅圖的內(nèi)容。第一幅圖描述了作者聽到王老師要退休的消息的場景。第二幅圖描述了作者將這個消息告訴同學們的場景。第三幅圖描述了同學們?yōu)閼c祝老師退休做的一些準備活動。第四幅圖描述了同學們慶祝王老師退休舉行的活動。因為描述的是發(fā)生在過去的事情，所以整篇文章應該用過去時態(tài)。