Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后以約30個詞概括短文的要點。
Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine.
Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didn’t catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff, preparing to go back home.
Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I could not believe my ears. “Yes. It’s very important to be patient,” the old man said. “Don’t consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didn’t move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收釣魚線）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish.
On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.

Answer 1

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One possible version:
The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success. (33 words)

試題分析：這是根據(jù)原來文章的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行總結(jié)，首先要讀懂原文內(nèi)容，把握文章的中心思想，最好是用自己的話進(jìn)行概括，避免使用原文中的句子；寫作時要準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合文章內(nèi)容。另外注意字?jǐn)?shù)，30個詞左右。
點評：本文屬于任務(wù)類作文，動筆前，一定要讀懂文章內(nèi)容，認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還要多讀文章，進(jìn)行有效的知識積累。