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Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s diseases. She lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her a success later on was the kindness and consideration she showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy with her choosing career, in traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles. She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How greatly she was!

1.that-when

2.which-that

3.is-was

4.tiring-tired

5.去掉for

6.safe-safely

7.choosing-chosen

8.write-writing

9.woman-women

10.greatly-great

【解析】

試題分析：考查定語從句，時態(tài)，形容詞等

1. lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’.她生活在一個女性教育次于男性的時代，定語從句要表示在…時候，應(yīng)用when，故把that-when

2. was hard work and determination which got her into medical school.此句為強(qiáng)調(diào)句，固定句式為it is …that，故把which-that

3. ；第五句There is story after story of how she,，全文都是過去式，本句也應(yīng)是過去時，故把is-was

4. she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver，tiring after a day’s work是做伴隨狀語，tired是感到疲憊的，tiring是令人厭煩的，一天的工作后應(yīng)該是感到疲憊，故把tiring-tired

5. a poor family who could not pay for her，pay是及物動詞，+sb表示付某人錢，故去掉for

6. was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies.只有副詞才能修飾動詞，要修飾deliver只能用副詞形式，故把safe-safely

7. seemed that she had been busy with her choosing career,本句應(yīng)表達(dá)的意思是她一直忙于她已選擇的職業(yè)，故用過去時表示已經(jīng)，故將choosing-chosen

8. traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles介詞as后不能用動詞原形，故把write-writing

9. also wrote a book intended for woman woman是可數(shù)名詞，前面無限定詞時，要用復(fù)數(shù)，故把woman-women

10. greatly she was!感嘆句，be動詞后用形容詞，故把greatly-great

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