Question

18．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（╲）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic step of baking．I insisted on doing mo st of the baking myself．I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up．
At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，"I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits．"
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

Answer 1

分析 作者的足球教練上周退役，作者在媽媽的指導(dǎo)下親手為教練作了餅干，在退役派對(duì)上教練對(duì)作者做的餅干贊不絕口．

解答 My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic stepof baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself．I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor afterI was packing them up．
At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，"I might have to retire again next year just∧get some more of these biscuits．"
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
詳解：
1：去掉in．考查介詞．當(dāng)用作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的詞前有next，last等詞時(shí)，其前不用介詞．
2：anything改為something．考查不定代詞．句意：我想為他做一些特別的事情．表示"一些"要用代詞something，而anything的意思是"任何事情"．
3：better改為best．考查形容詞最高級(jí)．句意：我的母親做出世界上最好的餅干．由makes后的the可知，此處要用形容詞最高級(jí)．
4：decide改為decided．考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)整篇文章所發(fā)生的時(shí)間來(lái)看，此處表示的是過(guò)去的事情，所以要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．
5：step改為steps．考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．表示"烘餅干的一些基本步驟"，要用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式．
6：well改為good．考查形容詞辨析．well通常指健康狀況，而此處指的是食物很好，要用形容詞good做系動(dòng)詞are的表語(yǔ)．
7：after改為when/while．考查狀語(yǔ)從句．句意：當(dāng)我在把它們打包起來(lái)時(shí)，一些（餅干）掉到了地板上．表示"當(dāng)…的時(shí)候"，要用when或while．
8：a改為the．考查冠詞．根據(jù)前面的"retirement party"可知，此處用the特指上文提到的his retirement party．
9：just后加to．考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．句意：我可能明年必須再退休一次，僅僅是為了吃到更多的餅干．此處用動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)．
10：enjoy改為enjoying．考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．在介詞of之后要用動(dòng)詞-ing形式．

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