Question

1．在班內(nèi)，同學(xué)們就"青少年是否應(yīng)該抽煙"展開了討論，討論結(jié)果如下：

人數(shù)	觀點(diǎn)	理由
大約80%	反對(duì)	危害身體健康；一曰成癮，很難戒除；影響他人健康
大約20%	贊成	身處重壓時(shí)，可以緩解壓力；一種時(shí)尚，感覺很酷

請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)．
要求：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，但要保持流暢、連貫． 開頭己經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Recently，we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes．On the one hand，about 20% of the students agree that adolescents smoke cigarettes．In their opinion，smoking can help them ease the pressure when they are under pressure．（高分句型一）Besides，smoking is fashionable and it feels cool to smoke in front of other peers．（贊成意見）However，on the other hand，about 80% object to it．They think smoking does great damage to their bodies．Once they are addicted to it，it'll be rough to quit it．What's more，smoking also has a harmful effect on others，non-smokers in particular．More importantly，if you are a heavy smoker，you'll feel terrible．（反對(duì)意見）
As far as I'm concerned，adolescents should not get into the bad habit of smoking．That's because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term．（高分句型二）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In their opinion，smoking can help them ease the pressure when they are under pressure．
高分句型二：
That's because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term．
句型一 ①smoking can help them ease the pressure 該句的主語為動(dòng)名詞充當(dāng)，動(dòng)名詞做主語謂語應(yīng)使用單數(shù)   ②when they are under pressure．該句是一個(gè)由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句
高分句型二：because it does no good to our physical 該句是一個(gè)由because 引導(dǎo)的位于is之后的表語從句

解答 Recently，we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes．
    On the one hand，about 20% of the students agree that adolescents smoke cigarettes．In their opinion，smoking can help them ease the pressure when they are under pressure．（高分句型一）Besides，smoking is fashionable and it feels cool to smoke in front of other peers．（贊成意見）However，on the other hand，about 80% object to it．They think smoking does great damage to their bodies．Once they are addicted to it，it'll be rough to quit it．What's more，smoking also has a harmful effect on others，non-smokers in particular．More importantly，if you are a heavy smoker，you'll feel terrible．（反對(duì)意見）
    As far as I'm concerned，adolescents should not get into the bad habit of smoking．That's because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term．（高分句型二）

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