Question

假定你是吉安一中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫Mrs. Worried的學(xué)生家長的微博上，你看到如下內(nèi)容：
I am the mother of a sixteen-year-old boy. Recently I find it becomes more and more difficult to communicate with my son. He always sticks to his own way of doing things，refusing to listen to his father and me. The tendency of his being too independent really worries me. I simply don’t know what to do. Can anybody help me?
請給這位家長寫一封信。要求包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1. 自己的看法；2. 陳述理由；3. 提出建議。
要求：  
1. 詞數(shù)130左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
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Answer 1

   From what you said，I know that you are quite worried about your son sticking to his own ways of doing things. In my opinion，this is one of the process of teenages growing up. As time goes on，they will be aware of the disadvantage of their behavior and change themselves gradually. SO long as they are directed properly.
At the same time you should have the idea that being independent can be of great value for children and make the teens mature more quickly. And they can learn something through life itself. Even though they make some errors.
What you should do is direct your son properly so that he can trust you. Meanwhile，have a talk with your son now and then emphsizing the importance of following others’ advice. In a word，try to teach him to learn the world... 
Best wishes
LI Hua

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性作文，要求考生根據(jù)原信內(nèi)容篩選出自己要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，再組織好語言，可以從父母與孩子交流的方式方法，多從各方面關(guān)心孩子。要選擇合適的時(shí)間來與孩子交流。以及在交流的時(shí)候注意語氣和形式。
點(diǎn)評：本文的要求較高，需要學(xué)生自己組織考點(diǎn)，梳理出所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。寫之前一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。