Question

網(wǎng)購已成為很多高中生青睞的一種現(xiàn)代購物方式。請你以”O(jiān)nline Shopping” 為題，并從以下三個方面，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约簩�網(wǎng)購的一些看法。
*越來越多的高中生喜歡在網(wǎng)上購買商品；
*網(wǎng)上購物可能存在的問題；
*你的建議。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：網(wǎng)店店主Internet shopping provider 假貨fake goods
Online Shopping
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Answer 1

Online Shopping
Nowadays, shopping through the Internet has been becoming increasingly popular among senior school students and they prefer to buy almost everything they want online.
Online shopping, however, can sometimes bring headaches to students when they enjoy shopping online. Firstly, the quality of the objects may not be as good as they are described and it is possible for them to buy fake goods. In addition, some students find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the commodities bought online.
I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out to screen and check Internet shopping providers. If so, I believe a promising online shopping is just awaiting us.

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文是關(guān)于時下流行的網(wǎng)購；文章只給出部分要點，需要考生做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮�？梢詮臄⑹鼍W(wǎng)購流行的現(xiàn)象角度出發(fā)。在審題的時候要注意時態(tài)同時注意要點要完全，不能有遺漏。寫作時使用合適的連接詞，讓文章更流暢。
點評：本文屬于半開放性作文，給考生的發(fā)揮余地較大。寫此類作文，可以采用3步走的寫作模板。
第一步：描繪現(xiàn)象如：Nowadays, shopping through the Internet has been becoming increasingly popular among senior school students and they prefer to buy almost everything they want online.
第二步：進(jìn)一步分析，可指出優(yōu)點或缺點如：Online shopping, however, can sometimes bring headaches to students when they enjoy shopping online. Firstly, the quality of the objects may not be as good as they are described and it is possible for them to buy fake goods. In addition, some students find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the commodities bought online.
第三步：總結(jié)觀點，如：I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out to screen and check Internet shopping providers. If so, I believe a promising online shopping is just awaiting us.
平時多注意句型的歸納和整理，注意作文有用詞匯的積累，讓作文行云流水，銜接自然。