假設(shè)你是李華，最近你與最好的朋友之間發(fā)生了一件不愉快的事情，使你很苦惱無措，所以寫信給某英文報“HEART—TO—HEART”專欄的編輯Ruth求助。要點如下：

1．描述事情經(jīng)過；

2．表達你的感受；

3．向Ruth求助。

注意： 1．詞數(shù)：100—120；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Ruth，

I’m writing to ask you for help.

Yours

Li Hua

Dear Ruth

Recently，I am having some trouble with my friends Helen，which makes me very upset.This is how it happened.

A few months ago，Helen did something wrong at schoolShe told me about it but would’t like the teacher or any other classmates to know it.So she ask me to keep it secret .I promised her.But then one day, Helen came from the teacher’s office and shouted at me angrily，saying that I had broken my promise and let her secret to the teacher.But I really didn’t do it.However hard I tried to explain to her ,she simply wouldn’t listen to me and decided to break with me .I feel greatly wrong but really do not know what to do.This event affects my normal life and study.Can you help me with my trouble?

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信寫作。是向某英文報刊的編輯Ruth寫信，講述最近自己與好朋友之間發(fā)生的意見不愉快的事情，Ruth求助。書信的內(nèi)容要求包括事情的經(jīng)過，作者的感受，以及向Ruth尋求幫助。對于事件過程的描述要注意真實具體，說明雙方矛盾的關(guān)鍵。真實表達自己目前的感受，以及誠懇地向Ruth求助。另外，要盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：對于事情得描述要用用一般過去時。表達目前的感受和請求幫助，用一般現(xiàn)在時。書信開頭可用I’m writing to ask you for help，結(jié)尾處可用I am looking forward to your reply.【亮點說明】Recently，I am having some trouble with my friends Helen，which makes me very upset.使用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，直接說明自己目前的困擾。Helen came from the teacher’s office and shouted at me angrily，saying that I had broken my promise and let her secret to the teacher.用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語，是文章句子水平更高。However hard I tried to explain to her ,she simply wouldn’t listen to me and decided to break with me.使用However＋adj引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。having some trouble with…，did something wrong，keep it secret，break my promise，listen to…，break with…等短語和詞組的運用，是文章耿介生動，感情的表達更加真切�！璼houted at me angrily ，I really didn’t do it ，she simply wouldn’t listen to me …，I feel greatly wrong but really do not know…等句子中，這些副詞的恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用，是文章的感情表達更加真切，事件的描述也更加真實。

考點：考查書信體裁的寫作

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