Question

1．Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．
有的人認(rèn)為多給予孩子表揚和鼓勵有助于他們的成長，有的人則相信及時指出孩子的缺點并適當(dāng)懲罰能幫助他們改正錯誤．你支持哪一種教育方式，請談?wù)勀愕目捶ê屠碛桑?br />One possible version：
The famous Chinese saying that it's the partents'fault if the child is not well taught indicates that family plays a very important role in children's growth．While another idiom goes like this''birds of a feather flock together"，which affirms friends'greart infuence on people．（高分句型一）Both sayings are ok，but in my point of view，family has the most important infulence on young adults．
It is obvious that famliy plays an important role in our life．As young adults are not yet independent，mostly they live with their families and then inevitably they have a subtle influence on young adults'character．Adolescence is a vital period of one's life．Many people form their character and outlook on life in their youth．Without parents'instruction or influence，it's easy for children to go bad．（高分句型二）
On the whole，compared with their peers，family is more important to teenagers．Parents must provide the best environment and behave themselves better．Parents can only give good advice and put them on right roads，and the final forming of their charcter lies in their own hands．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
While another idiom goes like this''birds of a feather flock together"，which affirms friends'greart infuence  on people．然而另一個習(xí)語說物以類聚，這一說法證明朋友對人們的影響是非常大的．
高分句型二：
Without parents'instruction or influence，it's easy for children to go bad．
沒有父母的正確引導(dǎo)和影響，孩子很容易誤入歧途．
句型一 which affirms friends'greart infuence  on people．該句是一個由which作關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，其在定語從句中作主語且替代前面提到的整個句子的內(nèi)容．
句型二 ①該句中使用了表否定的介詞without ②it's easy for children to go bad．該句型為常用的it 作形式主語 用不定式作真正的主語的句型，該句型的正確使用說明學(xué)生對該部分語法掌握良好．

解答 One possible version：
     The famous Chinese saying that it's the partents'fault if the child is not well taught indicates that family plays a very important role in children's growth．While another idiom goes like this''birds of a feather flock together"，which affirms friends'greart infuence  on people．（高分句型一）Both sayings are ok，but in my point of view，family has the most important infulence on young adults．
    It is obvious that famliy plays an important role in our life．As young adults are not yet independent，mostly they live with their families and then inevitably they have a subtle influence on young adults'character．Adolescence is a vital period of one's life．Many people form their character and outlook on life in their youth．Without parents'instruction or influence，it's easy for children to go bad．（高分句型二）
    On the whole，compared with their peers，family is more important to teenagers．Parents must provide the best environment and behave themselves better．Parents can only give good advice and put them on right roads，and the final forming of their charcter lies in their own hands．

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