Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Editor,

I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident．Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale．Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．

As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe．

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

1.第二句：neighbor改成neighbors

2.第二句：buying改成bought

3.第三句：turn改成turned

4.第四句：Fortunate改成Fortunately

5.第五句：去掉with

6.第六句：only 前加are

7.第六句：we改成they

8.第七句：which改成what

9.第九句：whole前加the / our

10.第九句：important改成importance

【解析】

試題分析：

1.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale可知鄰居有很多，故用neighbor的復(fù)數(shù)形式neighbors。

2.

3.After the meal, they had stomachaches 可知為過去時態(tài)，故將turn改成turned。

4.

5.Escape：及物動詞，逃脫。Escape death：逃脫死亡。所以應(yīng)去掉with。

6. 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。Be interested in sth.：對....感興趣。 As some illegal businessmen are only interested in making profits：因為一些違法商人只對賺錢感興趣。原句缺少be動詞。所以要在only 前加are。

7. seldom care about the necessary safety measures 的主語應(yīng)該為“那些商人”。故將we改成they。

8. happens to consumers是what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句，在原句中充當(dāng)賓語。Nor do they care about which happens to consumers。他們也不關(guān)心顧客將會發(fā)生什么事情。What在賓語從句中充當(dāng)主語，Which不能在從句中充當(dāng)主語，故將which改成what。

9.society中社會society只有一個，應(yīng)用the表示特指。或者我們整個社會：our whole society。故在whole前加the / our。

10. 考查詞性。realize the importance of food safety 意識到食品安全的重要性。Important：adj. 重要的 importance：n. 重要性。故將important改成importance。