Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每次錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I will cost this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is

modern, but there are still some problems, such as air pollution and noisy. In

the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quietly life. Where, the air

is fresh and the water is clean. Trees are green and birds are singing. I can go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. I can also climb the hills. Both of these will interesting and good for your health. Above all, I can learn more about the nature. So I want to go to the countryside for a change. Now, I am looking forward to leave.

 

Answer 1

1.cost→spend

2.去掉but

3.noisy→noise

4.quietly→quiet

5.Where→There

6.both→all

7.will后加be

8.your→my

9.去掉nature前的the

10.leave→leaving

【解析】

試題分析：

1.cost this summer holiday in the countryside. cost:“花費(fèi)，以…為代價”，所以應(yīng)改為spend，spend除了有“花費(fèi)”之義外，還可以翻譯為“度過”。且cost主語 往往為sth或it。

2.but there are still some problems. 固定用法。although/though不能與but連用，所以要去掉but。

3.noisy.“such as”為介詞短語，后面需要接名詞或代詞，所以要把a(bǔ)dj. noisy改成n. noise。

4. quietly life.quietly→quiet 此處需要形容詞來修飾名詞life，故把a(bǔ)dv. quietly改成adj.quiet。

5.Where，the air is fresh and the water is clean.該句是表達(dá)肯定含義的并列句。所以要用地點(diǎn)狀語用there。

6.Both of these will interesting and good for your health.此處的代詞指代上文的四個活動，而both只能指兩者，所以改為all，all指代三者或三者以上。

7.Both of these will interesting。will后加be 因?yàn)閣ill不能單獨(dú)做謂語。

8.→my 根據(jù)行文邏輯。

9.

10.“l(fā)ook forward to”中to為prep，所以要把動詞leave動名詞化，即改為leaving。