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6．I realize I am holding an apple tree in my hand---a little seed with the potential to become a beautiful big tree-a tree that can grow thousands of apples in its lifetime．Thousands of apples，each containing several seeds，each capable of growing a new tree which again can produce thousands of apples．Why then the world isn't filled with apple trees？
    It is a rule of nature that only a few of these seeds grow．And it comes to my mind it's quite often so with people's dreams also．Wonderful ideas come to our minds but they die too soon．The dreams are too far away from our life．And then one day we wonder what has happened to our dreams-why do they never come true？
    I wonder when someone is seriously growing apples，how much work does it require？
    Maybe it is like with our dreams：the seeds of your dreams do not automatically grow．Planting an apple tree，it might take many tries．You might meet dozens of people until you meet the true friend．But if you keep on sowing the seeds of your dream，one day you will succeed．And after that others will comment you are lucky to be successful-when in fact you probably have failed more often than you would like to count．But you are good at failing-you learn，you adapt，and then with your new knowledge you try again．And again．And again．And one day success is yours．
    I pick up the apple seed again-but instead of throwing it away I take an empty flower pot，pour some earth into it and plant the seed．Maybe one day it will grow into a proud tree．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120詞談?wù)勀銓�實現(xiàn)夢想的看法，內(nèi)容包括：
 （1）說明現(xiàn)實生活中許多人雖有夢想但沒有實現(xiàn)的原因．
 （2）談?wù)勀闳绾蚊鎸ΜF(xiàn)實，實現(xiàn)自己的人生夢想．
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可以參考閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：have the potential to do  （有做某事的潛能），grow into（長成），fail to do sth（沒能做某事），turn sth into reality（把某事變成現(xiàn)實），…reasons for （…的原因），first of all （首先），a rule of nature （自然規(guī)則），in other words（換句話說），work hard（努力工作），make dreams come true （使夢想變成現(xiàn)實），realize one's dreams（實現(xiàn)某人的夢想），keep on doing（繼續(xù)做某事），get the first prize（獲得第一名）．
【高分句型一】
1．First of all，it's a rule of nature that not all seeds can become big apple trees．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"that"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"nature"，關(guān)系代詞"that"在從句中作主語．
【高分句型二】
1．Actually，to realize your dreams is like planting an apple tree．
此處是動詞不定式作主語，句子的謂語動詞為"is"，表語為"like planting an apple tree"．
【高分句型三】
2．My dream is to become a physicist．
此處是動詞不定式"to do"作表語，主語為"My dream"，謂語動詞為"is"．

解答 Dreams are like the seeds of an apple tree．Every seed has the potential to grow into a big beautiful apple tree．But unfortunately，not all of them can succeed．（概括）
In our real life，many people have their beautiful dreams．But some of them fail to turn them into reality．There are many reasons for their failures．First of all，it's a rule of nature that not all seeds can become big apple trees．【高分句型一】In other words，maybe their dreams are not so realistic．Secondly，when they have their dreams，they don't work hard to make them come true．Actually，to realize your dreams is like planting an apple tree．【高分句型二】You have to keep on sowing the seeds until you succeed．（說明現(xiàn)實生活中許多人雖有夢想但沒有實現(xiàn)的原因）
I like physics．My dream is to become a physicist．【高分句型三】Last year，I got the first prize in physics contest in our city．I am sure my dream will be realized if I keep on trying．（個人觀點：如何面對現(xiàn)實，實現(xiàn)自己的人生夢想）

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