Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese

學(xué)校計(jì)劃明年暑假對(duì)學(xué)生宿舍進(jìn)行改造，校長(zhǎng)就設(shè)計(jì)方案征求學(xué)生的意見。假設(shè)你是 李華，給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，對(duì)設(shè)計(jì)方案提出一些速議。你的信必須包括以下內(nèi)容:

1.談?wù)勀阋?guī)劃的內(nèi)容;

2.并說(shuō)明你的規(guī)劃理由(從有利于學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)、活動(dòng)、休息等角度進(jìn)行說(shuō)明)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I’m very excited to hear that our student dormitories will be transformed in summer holiday next year.

On behalf of us students, I prefer to bring forward several opinions about dormitory transformation. First, the duty room must be located at the gate of the first floor in order to make sure the security of students. Second, the dormitories of students in Grade 3 should be arranged on the higher floors so that they can get involved in a relatively quiet environment to study for their credit points or college entrance examination. Last but not the least, that they may pour into the public toilet at the same time can lead to a certain push or squeeze, so it couldn’t be better if there could be washrooms in each dorm.

I will appreciate it if my advice could be accepted and I’m extremely expecting a new look of our dormitory.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校計(jì)劃明年暑假對(duì)學(xué)生宿舍進(jìn)行改造，李華就設(shè)計(jì)方案提出個(gè)人意見，寫一封信給校長(zhǎng)。

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，學(xué)校計(jì)劃明年暑假對(duì)學(xué)生宿舍進(jìn)行改造，李華就設(shè)計(jì)方案提出個(gè)人意見，寫一封信給校長(zhǎng)。

第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：students, bring forward, be located, pour into等。

第三步：確定文章結(jié)構(gòu)，本文可以采取三段的寫法，第一段主要提出得知宿舍改造的消息之后非常高興；第二段提出個(gè)人的意見并給出原因；第三段提出期盼。

第四步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。此處文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。