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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Good afternoon, everyone, I feel honor to stand here to share my ideas about the topic of communicate with our parents.

Parents are the people which love us most, so it is necessary to keep a good relationship with them. Here are my suggestions with how to make it easier to communicate with parents.

First, we should respect and trust our parents. Don’t be rude to them even if they had done something wrong. They have been experienced more and always try their best to protect us from dangers. Second, whether we often talk with them about our life and experience, we will know each other better. Third, if sometimes we don’t agree with our parents decisions, we should try to put themselves in their shoes and we will soon understand them. Remember they really want is only the best for us.

Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】honored

about the topic of communicate with our parents.

communicating

Parents are the people which love us most，so it is necessary to keep a

who

good relationship with them. Here are my suggestions with how to make it

on/about

easier to communicate with parents.

First, we should respect and trust our parents. Don’t be rude to them even if

they had done something wrong. They have been\ experienced more and

have

always try their best to protect us from dangers. Second, whether we often talk

if

with them about our life and experience, we will know each other better. Third, if

sometimes we don’t agree with our parents decisions, we should try to put

parents’

themselves in their shoes and we will soon understand them. Remember ∧ they

ourselves what

really want is only the best for us.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】本文是一篇話題為關于如何與父母的交流的演講稿。

第一處，honor改為honored。 feel honored to do sth. 為…感到榮幸。feel是連系動詞，后接形容詞作表語，honored adj. 榮幸的。

第二處，communicate改為communicating。the topic of之后應該用動詞ing形式做賓語。

第三處， which改為who。考查定語從句。people做先行詞，指人，關系代詞用who。意為：父母是最愛我們的人。

第四處， with改為on/about。介詞用錯。on/about 關于…， 就… 方面。下面我就如何更容易地和父母交流說一下我的建議。

第五處， had改為have。時態(tài)錯誤。此處應該用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，即使他們做錯了一些事情，也不要粗魯?shù)貙Υ�他們。主句用祈使句，是屬于現(xiàn)在時態(tài)范疇，從句中用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，表示過去的事情對現(xiàn)在的影響。

第六處， 將been去掉。experience v. 經歷，此處用主動語態(tài)。他們經歷的更多，總是盡自己最大努力保護我們免受危險。

第七處， whether改為if。此處為條件狀語從句，如果我們經常跟他們談談我們的生活和經歷，我們會彼此更了解對方。if譯為“如果”，而whether沒有此意。

第八處， parents改為parents’。此處用名詞的所有格修飾名詞decisions，意為“他們的決定”。

第九處， themselves改為ourselves。反身代詞用錯。sb. put oneself in sb. else’s shoes為別人設身處地地想，與…換位思考。反身代詞ourselves此處做賓語，要跟主語we一致。

第十處，在Remember和they之間加what。what連接主語從句，在主語從句中做want的賓語，what they really want他們真正想要的只是為了我們好。