【題目】假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)正在征稿，題目是The Most Impressive Woman in My Life, 請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇稿件，投給校英文報(bào)。內(nèi)容包括：

1.這位女士的特點(diǎn)；

2.這位女士對(duì)于你的影響。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

The Most Impressive Woman in My Life

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【答案】The Most Impressive Woman in My Life

During my life there are many people who impressed me deeply. But my English teacher Miss Zhao is the most impressive woman in my eyes.

Miss Zhao is a warm-hearted lady with a charming smile on her face. As a teacher, she is ready to help those students in need. Besides, she is strict with us and responsible for her work. There was story after story of how Miss Zhao, tired after a day’s work, went late at night to grade our papers. Under her guidance, I became interested in English. Without her help, I couldn’t have made rapid progress.

Such is Miss Zhao, an excellent teacher who makes a deep impression on me and wins my respect.

【解析】這是一篇人物類命題作文。聯(lián)系題干，以此為中心內(nèi)容進(jìn)行選材。考生在寫(xiě)這篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.要分析題干，圍繞題干進(jìn)行選材，在寫(xiě)作思路方面，題目要求寫(xiě)一個(gè)在生活中給你留下最深刻印象的女人，所以我們可以將她的外形、性格、人物特點(diǎn)以及她對(duì)你產(chǎn)生的影響簡(jiǎn)要介紹一下。

2.概況要點(diǎn)要齊全，將題目要求的內(nèi)容羅列完整，重點(diǎn)對(duì)她的特點(diǎn)以及她對(duì)你產(chǎn)生的影響進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，要注意層次結(jié)構(gòu)，注意上下文的銜接。

3.注意時(shí)態(tài)與語(yǔ)態(tài)，全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，但敘述到以往發(fā)生的事情時(shí)注意要用到過(guò)去時(shí)，描述第三人時(shí)要注意動(dòng)詞形態(tài)的使用。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

1.文章采用了“in one’s eyes 在某人眼中”“ become interested in對(duì)…感興趣”“be ready to準(zhǔn)備好做某事”“make a deep impression on sb給某人留下深刻印象”等高頻短語(yǔ)。

2.文章采用了“During、But、Besides、Under、Without”等介詞和連接詞使文章更加層次，連貫通順。

3. an excellent teacher who makes a deep impression on me and wins my respect，在句中，出現(xiàn)了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。

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