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2．假定你是李曉華，住在江城．你的筆友Bob談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)的情況．請你用英語寫一封回信．回信必須包括下列內(nèi)容：
1、自然情況：位于江蘇的西北，風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，適合居��；
2、成就：經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速，新建了不少工廠、住房和道路；
3、存在的問題：水污染，空氣污染，交通擁擠；
4、對江城發(fā)展的看法：內(nèi)容自選．
注意：1、回信中不能使用"江城"以外的地名；
   2、詞數(shù)100個左右．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：economy  n．經(jīng)濟(jì)
Dear Bob，
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．       ．
Yours，
Li Xiaohua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹家鄉(xiāng)的文章．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容主要包括：一點(diǎn)明主題；二自然情況；三成就；四存在的問題；五對江城發(fā)展的看法．
高分句型：
1．It is a beautiful place for people to live in，whose economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years．句子里whose 引導(dǎo)定語從句，先行詞是a beautiful place．
這是一個適宜人們居住的美麗的地方，在過去的十年間，它的經(jīng)濟(jì)在快速發(fā)展．
2．I also think that measures should be taken to make traffic go smoothly so that we'll have a better hometown in future．句子里用了take measures to do 的被動形式，表示"措施應(yīng)該被采取"；so that 用的目的狀語從句，表示"為了"．
我也認(rèn)為，為了在未來有一個更美好的家鄉(xiāng)，我們應(yīng)該采取措施讓交通更順暢．

解答 It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．（點(diǎn)明主題）The city is situated in the northwest of Jiangsu Province．（自然情況）It is a beautiful place for people to live in，whose economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years．【高分句型一】New factories，houses and roads have been built．More schools and hospitals are available for people．（成就）However，there are still some problems，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours．（存在的問題）
     In my opinion，Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically．I also think that measures should be taken to make traffic go smoothly so that we'll have a better hometown in future．【高分句型二】（對江城發(fā)展的看法）

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)一般給的比較多，這就要求我們用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞和句式把這些要點(diǎn)連城篇章．在此過程中，要注意詞語的合理運(yùn)用，以及層次的遞進(jìn)關(guān)系．