Question

【題目】請以“One Thing I'm Proud of”為題，用英語寫一篇100－120個詞的短文，記述一件你自己認為得意的事情。要求如下：

1.記述事情經(jīng)過；

2.簡要說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。

注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計詞數(shù))。

One Thing I'm Proud of

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Answer 1

【答案】

One Thing I'm Proud of

I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.

The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.

I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice makes perfect.”

【解析】

試題分析：本題考查記敘文的寫作，記一件令自己驕傲的事，記敘+議論型作文，命題開放性作文。高考英語寫作的要求在高考英語寫作閱卷的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的其中有幾點是十分值得我們關(guān)注的，這么幾點提示十分重要： 1 豐富的詞匯和較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)的運用；2 高級的詞匯和語法的使用； 3 連詞的使用 ；4 切題，且完成題目中提示內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】這篇范文圍繞主題，根據(jù)提示要點展開層次清楚，用詞豐富，運用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，高級的句型有：The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. 這是連詞the first day，Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good.這里使用過去分詞，Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. 這里使用了不定式，I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. 這里使用原因狀語從句和賓語從句，還使用了諺語：Practice makes perfect.”