Question

12．某中學(xué)英文雜志社針對(duì)如何養(yǎng)成好的消費(fèi)習(xí)慣進(jìn)行征文，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況寫(xiě)一篇題為"My advice on how to use pocket money properly"的文章向該雜志社投稿．
1．從身邊的小事做起，節(jié)省不必要的開(kāi)支；
2．對(duì)自己的支出和和收入進(jìn)行記錄．
3．合理計(jì)劃和安排．
要求：適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，詞數(shù)不得少于100．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況寫(xiě)一篇題為"My advice on how to use pocket money properly"的文章向該雜志社投稿，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：從身邊的小事做起，節(jié)省不必要的開(kāi)支；對(duì)自己的支出和和收入進(jìn)行記錄．合理計(jì)劃和安排．
 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：First首先；Second其次；Besides另外；
Do you always regret wasting money？（高分句型一）
Second，keep a record of the money you receive from your parents or others and also the money you spend．（高分句型二）
Then you'll see how much you spend and know whether you spend too much．（高分句型三）

解答 My advice on how to use pocket money properly
     Have you ever spent your pocket money on unnecessary things in your life？Do you always regret wasting money？（高分句型一）Here is some good advice for you to follow．
     First，save money as much as possible．Don't spend money on unnecessary things．When you want to buy something，ask yourself，is it a necessity for me？If not，don't buy it．Second，keep a record of the money you receive from your parents or others and also the money you spend．（高分句型二）Then you'll see how much you spend and know whether you spend too much．（高分句型三）Besides，you can use the things that you don't use to exchange with your classmates．Then you both can save money．

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