分析 該作文是應(yīng)用文.文章主題注意條理要清晰,邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當,同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內(nèi)容,不拖泥帶水.要注意題中所給的信息,不可偏題,應(yīng)用文寫作對于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達到寫作目的.盡量保持卷面整潔,字體美觀,注意行文的連貫性.使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次.
【亮點說明】文章第一段第二句使用了一個賓語從句I am more than delighted to hear that a New Year party will be held for us Chinese overseas students.聽到新年派對將是我們海外華人學生舉辦的,我高興的不得了.第三句開頭用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語.Being active and enthusiastic,由于我很活躍和熱心.文章第二段第一句使用了一個while引導的時間狀語從句. While I've seen the notice,I'd also like to know more about the party.當我看到告示,我也想要知道關(guān)于派對的更多事情.第二句是一個what引導的主語從句,其中的when和where并不是從句引導詞,What confuses me first is when and where the party will be held and what kinds of activities we'll have at the party.最初讓我感到疑惑的事是排隊將會在什么時候和什么地點舉行,并且我們在派對上將會有什么樣的活動. 除了從句之外,文章中還用到了不少好的短語和精煉的結(jié)構(gòu).more than 不僅僅;fit for適合;not only…but also不僅…而且;have a good knowledge of精通…;both…and都;I‘d like to我愿意…;以及first…Additionally…finally 副詞組成的分層說明的結(jié)構(gòu);sign up報名.
解答 Dear Tom,
I'm Li Hua,an exchange student from China.I am more than delighted to hear that a New Year party will be held for us Chinese overseas students.Being active and enthusiastic,I think I'm fit for being a host.(高分句型 )Not only can I speak English fluently,but also I have a good knowledge of both Chinese and British customs.(高分句型)
While I've seen the notice,I'd also like to know more about the party.What confuses me first is when and where the party will be held and what kinds of activities we'll have at the party.(高分句型)Additionally,do you have any special requirements about clothes?Finally,I'd also like to know the deadline for signing up.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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