分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文,根據(jù)提示信息以An Unexpected Day為題進(jìn)行寫作,寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點(diǎn):分別從when,where,what happened,how didi you feel幾個方面來描述一天 2、圖表是文章的總體框架,要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):On my way to 在去往…是路上;give sb a hand幫某人一下;make a decision做出決定;On the other hand另一方面;take the competition參加競賽;keep in touch with 取得聯(lián)系
解答 An Unforgettable Experience
Last weekend,I walked to the school for an English competition.On my way to school,I saw an old lady lying on the ground,crying.(高分句型) There were many people around her.I went to her and found that she was bleeding,I was sure that she was very dangerous at that time,but nobody gave her a hand.(高分句型)
I had to make a decision:should I go to take the competition or help the waman in need.In fact it was hard for me because I could win the trust of my teachers and parents again if I got a satisfatory result.Last week,my teacher said I cheated in the English exam,but I didn't do it.On the other hand,the woman would die if nobody helped her.(高分句型)
At last,I decided to help her.I sent her to the hospital and tried to keep in touch with her family members.They all thanked me.When I got to school,I was too late for the exam.Fortunately,our English teacher allowed me to take the competition alone and praised me.(高分句型)I was very surprised.Later I knew that the husband of the woman had called my teacher and told him the truth.Of course I got a high scores in the exam.
點(diǎn)評 提綱類寫作的文章較開放式的文體,比較好寫.學(xué)生在寫作的過程中,首先思路要清晰,要對所表達(dá)的句子通順的說出來,遇到不會的要學(xué)會替換所用語,來達(dá)到同樣的意思.在每一篇作文中,對于表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的句子,都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來加強(qiáng)文章的層次感,適當(dāng)運(yùn)用俗語,運(yùn)用平時常用的句式來使文章富有變化,表達(dá)地道得體.
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