Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面材料，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

D-daughter M-mommy

D:"Mommy,are you leaving home again?"

M:"Yes,honey.Mommy is going to fight a monster!"

D:"A monster?Is it scarier than a big roaring tiger?Oh my!”

M:"Well...yes!A lot scarier!It's called Virus.Many people are working hard to defeat the monster."

D:"Who are they?”

M:"They're the scientists who are working on new medicines to cure the ill and the construction workers who are building new hospitals for patients as fast as possible.They are the delivery people who are delivering masks to everyone in need,risking being caught by the virus monsters,too...They are all ordinary people,including volunteers,but now they are also powerful soldiers;they are the bravest fighters and they are heroes!"

D:"They are so brave!But mommy,are you scared?"

M: Yes,everyone is scared.Mommy's too.But if no one goes to fight the monster,there will be more monsters,and the monsters will be even more aggressive,and they may defeat us all.”

D:"But mommy...I don't want you to leave me.”

M:"Baby,mommy doesn't want to leave you either.Sweetie,do you know what"to be brave" means?To be brave is to do the right thing even if you are really scared.?

D:"Mommy,I'll be brave,too.I want to be a doctor when I grow up,and I will fight the monsters together with you.”

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述對(duì)話內(nèi)容；

2.談?wù)勀銓?duì)“勇士”的理解；

3.寫出誰(shuí)是你心目中的“勇士”，并簡(jiǎn)要陳述理由（至少兩點(diǎn)）。

（寫作要求）

1.表明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)提供理由或論據(jù)；

2.闡述觀點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時(shí)，不得直接引用原文中的句子；

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

4.不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】A mother explains to her daughter why she leaves home to fight against the virus monsters like ordinary heroes, sparking her ambition to fight like a soldier. (27 words)

Personally, heroes refer to people from all walks of life who perform their duties faithfully whatever the situations. They play an irreplaceable role in any critical moment. Dangerous and urgent scenes can bring out their best, such as courage, responsibility and commitment.

Heroes in my heart are my teachers. After the outbreak of the virus, they rise to the challenge of live streaming lectures and grading assignments online. Not only do they have to adapt themselves to the new teaching model but they make enormous sacrifices as well. Besides, serving as the essential role of imparting knowledge to their students, they offer immediate assistance in terms of mental relief and comfort.

To conclude, those who do their own parts whole-heartedly deserve our credit and admiration.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀寫任務(wù)，要求概述對(duì)話內(nèi)容，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求概述對(duì)話內(nèi)容并發(fā)表自己的看法：1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述對(duì)話內(nèi)容；2.談?wù)勀銓?duì)“勇士”的理解；3.寫出誰(shuí)是你心目中的“勇士”，并簡(jiǎn)要陳述理由（至少兩點(diǎn)）。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； faithfully（忠誠(chéng)地），hero（勇士、英雄），critical（關(guān)鍵的），urgent（緊急的）， outbreak（爆發(fā)），sacrifice（犧牲），admiration （欽佩），deserve （值得），assistance（援助），irreplaceable（不可替代的）及enormous（巨大的）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。