Question

隨著社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，人類的活動(dòng)越來越多，很多動(dòng)植物瀕臨滅絕。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以 “Wildlife Protection”為題寫一篇120詞左右的文章，說明如何保護(hù)瀕危野生動(dòng)植物。

原因	棲息地破壞     2、食物短缺     3、過度獵殺     ……
如何保護(hù)	保護(hù)環(huán)境       2、建立保護(hù)區(qū)   3、禁止捕殺    ……
呼吁	……

 
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Answer 1

With the development of society and economy , many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons. Above all, their habitat is threatened, resulting in a lack of food. Besides, they are being hunted without mercy.
As we know, animals are our friends. To protect them is to protect ourselves. So we should first raise people’s awareness of protecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops, the killing can, too. Second, we can collect money to help protect wildlife and build reserves. As for the government, it should pass laws to prevent endangered animals from being hunted. 
In a word, human beings should learn to live in peace with wildlife. If everyone makes a little contribution, it will make a big difference for wild animals. Let’s take action right now.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求以“Wildlife Protection”為題寫一篇120詞左右的文章，說明如何保護(hù)瀕危野生動(dòng)植物。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很具體,考生需要進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).別忘了發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。So we should first raise people’s awareness of protecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops, the killing can, too.這句話用了并列句，原因狀語從句，時(shí)間狀語從句，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的駕馭能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。