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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一下作文。文中共有10出語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處寫一個漏字符號（）, 在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：
1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.


【小題1】usually→  usual
【小題2】while →when
【小題3】hear→ heard  
【小題4】happened →happening
【小題5】shocking→ shocked 
【小題6】peoples →people
【小題7】pushed 前去掉had
【小題8】but → and
【小題9】his →my
【小題10】proud后加 of

解析試題分析：上周六我和往常一樣去圖書館，當我在湖邊看書的時候，突然聽到喊救命聲。我立馬跑過去看看發(fā)生了什么事情，讓人震驚的是我看到一個小孩在水里掙扎，我毫不猶豫得跳進水中，終于把孩子救了上來。
【小題1】usually→  usual 。I went to the library as usually.固定短語 as usual“像往常一樣”，所以把usually改為usual。
【小題2】while →when。I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help固定句型 be doing sth ……when“正在做某事這時”，while后不能跟短暫性動詞，把while改為when。
【小題3】hear→ heard 。I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help根據(jù)語境可知作者敘述過去的事情，故把hear改為heard。
【小題4】happened →happening。 I went up to see what was happened.。happen是不及物動詞，沒有被動形式，根據(jù)語境可知此處表示當時正在發(fā)生的事情，故用進行時態(tài)，把happened改為happening。
【小題5】shocking→ shocked 。I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water。shocking意思是“令人震驚的”，指事物的特征，shocked意思是“感到震驚的”指的是人的感受，所以把shocking改為shocked。
【小題6】peoples →people。while many peoples were standing。people當“人們”講時，沒有復數(shù)形式，如果當“民族”講時，可以有復數(shù)形式，故把peoples改為people。
【小題7】pushed 前去掉had。I had pushed through the crowd。從事情發(fā)生的情況可以判斷作者一邊推開人群，一邊脫外套，表示兩個動作同時發(fā)生，而不表示動作先后，不用過去完成時態(tài)，故把had去掉。
【小題8】but → and。but jumped into the water quickly。由語境可知took off和jumped into是連續(xù)發(fā)出的動作，沒有轉折關系，故把but改為and。
【小題9】his →my。To his great relief, the kid was saved. 。根據(jù)語境可知看到孩子安然無恙，作者感到如釋重負，把his改為my。
【小題10】proud后加 of。I was proud what I had done.。固定短語：be proud of “對……感到驕傲，自豪”，后面跟名詞，代詞，動名詞或what從句，所以在proud 后加of。
考點：考查短文改錯。

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