Question

5．寒假即將來臨．你班同學討論了假期計劃，提出了不同看法，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關(guān)討論的英語短文，并談談你的看法．內(nèi)容包括：優(yōu)點、缺點、呆在家中花費少、不能親身了解外界；、外出旅游增長知識、開闊眼界 花費多、旅途不便．
注意：
詞數(shù)100字左右．
短文必須包括表中所列要點，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容分段表述．
可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
The winter holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world．However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于假期計劃的議論文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和第一人稱．內(nèi)容包括：一點明主題；二呆在家中和外出旅游的優(yōu)缺點；三自己的觀點．
高分句型：
1．However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．句子里prefer to 表示"更喜歡"；since引導原因狀語從句．
但是，其他人更喜歡外出旅游，因為這能增加他們的知識，拓寬他們的視野．
2．In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．句子里for 引導原因狀語從句，表示"因為"； what I like是賓語從句，what 做從句的賓語．
依我看來，待在家里更好，因為我能做我喜歡的事，例如，讀書，看電視，幫助父母做家務．

解答 The winter holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what  to do during the holiday．（點明主題）．Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world．However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．【高分句型一】But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．（呆在家中和外出旅游的優(yōu)缺點）In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．【高分句型二】（自己的觀點）

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