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目前, 越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請(qǐng)家教。對(duì)于這一現(xiàn)象, 存在兩種不同觀點(diǎn)：

有些人認(rèn)為有必要	另一些人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要
跟老師學(xué)比自己學(xué)好 可以鞏固課堂所學(xué)內(nèi)容 可以學(xué)到更多的東西	容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息 許多培訓(xùn)班和家教以贏利為目的

請(qǐng)您根據(jù)以上提示, 以Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary ?為題, 寫(xiě)一篇100 詞左右的短文, 反映表中內(nèi)容, 并簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
要求：層次清晰, 連貫流暢；表達(dá)靈活, 不要逐字逐句翻譯。
參考詞匯：鞏固strengthen；
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
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Answer 1

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Possible version:
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. What’s more, the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money.
In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類(lèi)作文，短文標(biāo)題、開(kāi)頭及寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，我們所要做的就是根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇英文短文。由于題干給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)潔，所以需要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展。題目中的要點(diǎn)都要提到，缺一不可。要反映表中內(nèi)容, 并簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。另外，要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意層次清晰, 連貫流暢；表達(dá)靈活, 不要逐字逐句翻譯。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意詞數(shù)100 詞左右，不要寫(xiě)得太多，更不能太少。盡量避免使用生僻詞匯，在正確使用簡(jiǎn)單句的同時(shí)，要努力使用復(fù)合句，提升作文檔次。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于話題類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。